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Ok I can really tell why is this is being called Hentai.... One can only assume what happens three minutes later after that french-kiss , and apperant hogging of body. And you may say 'you have perverted minds' but you ARE portraying a french-kiss and it's really heading that direction.

Also, besides of the point of the two characters being lesbians, THEY DO NOT LOOK like adults; it looks like a 13y/o girl french-kissing a 16 year old girl, and that to me, disgusts me (the second half of it). It's portraying animated children almost... egh.. I'll stop there.

Dun get me wrong, I love your style and graphics, but you might want to portray them better and more specifcly next time.

Also specify who the letter is for; I wouldn't send this to a female friend, with me being a guy and her being straight.

There, constructive.

Author's Response:

Well, you got a little closer to their actual ages, better than the others, but still several years too low for both of them. It's the style. Believe me, I could name dozens of artists whose styles are far, far more cutesy than mine. You have to learn to understand what things represent in various artists' styles.

If you read my description, you can see that I already *did* specify that this is not for heterosexual guys to send to heterosexual girls (as if it wasn't bloody obvious enough).

And to your first comment, no matter what you may envision happening offscreen, you simply cannot call something "hentai" that contains no sex or nudity.

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Score: 9

"Excellent...just Great."

submission: Hoy te amo ++

date: January 13, 2005

I amed you drew these with paint. The song just flowed with show, spectacular, I could see the creativeness on this, I could even see the work you put to this. And it's really 'cute' in the sense of love. I liked this, should've stayed number one. Please keep this style.

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Score: 2

"Good, but not that good."

submission: Merry Melony ep.1

date: January 13, 2005

The graphics were good. The sound was good. But the flash just disappointed me. It seems very grotesque to start off. Great animation, but a white rabbit talking? I thought I was watching the cartton of foster home for imaginary friends. Sorry it did not really inspired me. I voted a 0 on it, because I truly believe it should not belong in such high rank.